Shatner Screenplay - Comments Welcome

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Screenplay.
Setting: Porsche dealership
Bill Shatner walks-in and browses a few cars
Sexy pan shots of a few classics.
Shatner walks to a Taycan. "What is this car?"
SA enters. "That is Porsche's new all-electric sedan, the Taycan."
Overhead shot of Shatner. Shatner looks up into camera. "KAHN!!!" with great anger.
End.
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Screenplay.
Setting: Porsche dealership
Bill Shatner walks-in and browses a few cars
Sexy pan shots of a few classics.
Shatner walks to a Taycan. "What is this car?"
SA enters. "That is Porsche's new all-electric sedan, the Taycan."
Overhead shot of Shatner. Shatner looks up into camera. "KAHN!!!" with great anger.
End.
Okay maybe I am slow here but what am I missing from this?
 
 




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